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高考英语不落俗套的亮点词汇和高分范文阅卷时，一篇高考作文往往在分钟内就会被判定生死，大众化1的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳在词汇方面如果一篇作文中突然出现几个与众不同、让人眼前一亮的词汇，阅卷老师的给分也绝不会吝啬；在句式方面如果考生多运用一些并列句和复合句等高级句式，并注意句式的灵活多变，使文章读起来抑扬顿挫，让考生深厚的语言功底得以体现，阅卷老师一定会毫不犹豫地将考生的作文定位于五档线不落俗套的亮点词汇写作最基本的要求是考查考生遣词造句的能力，遣词的原则是表达准确、地道自然、生动形象如果考生在掌握了最基本词汇的基础上，能够将一些常用词汇进行升华，就将成为高考作文获得高分的亮点之
一一、使用亮点词汇的种方法
4.〃语〃众不同，避免人云亦云1写作时，恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉
①im busywith mylessons now,for thecollege entranceexamination,which isvery importantto me,is near.fm occupiedwith mylessons nowfor thecollege entrancezexamination,which isof greatimportance tome,is aroundthe（天津高考书面表达）corner.2017・
②so i have tobother youto correctmy mistakes in themateriali attachto theletter.—therefore,ihaveno choicebut toput youto troublebycorrecting mymistakesinthe materiali attachto theletter.（全国卷书面表达）2016•i更新换代，避免重复
2.写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法
①the teamwill holdmany activities,some ofwhich willappeal to you,including manymatches.—the teamwill holda rangeof activities,some ofwhich will（全国卷书面表appealtoyou,including manymatches.2017•hi达）
②weve built a newexperiment buildingbeside the oldone andweve alsobuilta library where theold playgroundused to be.—weve builta newexperiment buildingbeside theoldone andweve alsoset upalibrarywheretheoldplaygroundusedto be.单词与短语巧妙互用
3.一般情况下短语优先，应多使用短语、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采但有时单词比短语更生动，可以‘一词传神〃
①ive decidedto teach you tang poetry in room101building1at8am onwednesday,which willlast twohours.—ive made up my mind toteachyoutangpoetryinroom101building1at8am onwednesday,which willlast twohours.（全国卷书面表达）2017•i
②we canlook atthis problem in many ways.—we canview thisprobleminmanyways.（view比look at更有〃内涵〃）用高年级学到的词汇代替低年级学到的词汇
4.为了表现自己的语言功底，吸引阅卷老师的眼球，应避免反复使用初中或小学阶段学过的词汇，尽量用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替
①i shouldsay sorryfor being unable to go to thebookstore withyou onfriday afternoon.t oweyou anapology forbeingunabletogotothe（全国卷书面表bookstore withyou onfriday afternoon.2016•hi达）
②second,i amtrying mybest toacquire theessentialknowledge andskills concerningmy position.-second,i amsparing noefforts toacquire theessential（天津高考书knowledge andskills concerningmy position.2017♦面表达）二.高分必备的亮点词汇
①thats whyi thinkthe tripalong theyangtze riverwill bea better choice.—thats whyi thinkthe tripalong theyangtze riverwill be北京高考书面表达）abetteralternative•这就是为什么我认为长江之行将是一个更好的选择@in thecoming threeyears,our schoollife willbe difficult.一in thecoming threeyears,our schoollife willbe（江西高考书面表达）challenging.2014•在随后的三年里，我们的学校生活将会非常具有挑战性小试牛刀・・请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的加黑部分i.（全国卷书面表达）
1.2017•i so,please spendsome timetakinga brieflook atthe historyof thetang dynasty,which willhelpyou preparefor yourclass.therefore;make preparationsfor（全国卷书面表达）
2.2017•h thecraftsmen willshow visitorshowto cutpaper intodifferent shapeson thespot.various/arange of（北京高考书面表达）
3.2016・our classthought of the ideatomake betteruse ofused materials.came upwith（四川高考书面表达）
4.2016•the reasonsare thefollowing.as follows（湖南高考书面表达）
5.2015•at thesame time,i decidedtostudy harderrather thanwaste precioustime onthose uselessthings...madeupmymind
6.as highschool students,we shouldbe neatlydressedwhen atschool.are supposedto
7.theres noharm inyour stayingup latesometimes,occasionally/once ina while
8.the teacherdirected thegifted studentstowards themoredifficult courses.challenging
9.so faras iknow,everyone of them wantstobea modelstudent.intends to口.请用高级词汇提升下面的考生作文假定你是中学生李华,家住泉州你的英国笔友来信谈到jason了他的家乡伦敦，并希望了解你的家乡泉州的情况请你用英文写一封回信回信必须包括以下内容自然情况地理位置优越、气候风景宜人等；
1.；发展成就经济发展迅速、城市高楼林立等
2.存在问题交通拥堵现象、空气污染问题等；
3.对泉州发展的看法内容由考生自己拟定
4.词数左右；
1100.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯2参考词汇高层建筑highrise building-考生作文-dear jason,
①im veryhappy to hear from you and know aboutyourbeautiful home city london.now idlike totell yousomethingabout myhometown quanzhou.quanzhou isa beautifulplacefor peopleto livein.its economyhas beendeveloping©fastduring thepast tenyears.new bridgesand roadshave been
③built,highrise buildingsstanding inmany partsofthe
④⑤city.more andmore schoolsand hospitalsare usefulforthe nativepeople.it isdeveloping into a modern and
⑦©beautiful city.but thereare stillsome problems,such as
⑧heavy trafficin rushhours andserious airpollution,which⑩have a bad©effect onpeoples dailylife.i thinkquanzhoushould develophealthily andscientifically,so thatwe couldhavea betterhometown infuture.yours,li hua【升格作文】dear jason,
①im morethan happytohearfromyouandknowaboutyour beautifulhomecitylondon.now idlike totell yousomethingabout myhometown quanzhou.quanzhou isabeautiful placefor peopleto livein.its economyhas been
②developing rapidlyduring thepast tenyears.new bridges
③and roadshave beenset up,_hiqhrise buildingsstanding in
④many partsofthecity.an increasingnumber ofschools andhospitalsare©available forthe nativepeople.it isdeveloping
⑥⑦intoamodernandattractive/charming city.however,thereare stillsome problems,such asheavy trafficin rushhours and
⑨©severe airpollution,which haveabadirfluence/impact on⑩peoples dailylife.ir myopirior/as faras iam concerned,quanzhou shoulddevelophealthily andscientifically,so thatwe couldhave abetterhometown infuture.yours,li hua。
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